"Mom, you're a good noticer"
The first time I walk into a school I often hear things like: “Staying the night?” or “Are you going on a trip?” My suitcase is quite deceiving at first. Inside my well worn suitcase is a bundle of books. Anywhere from 10-30. My job as a literacy consultant takes me from school to school, district to district, state to state. I recently realized that during the past 13 years of teaching teachers I have never gone into a school without books. Maybe it’s because I am often an outsider and my books offer comfort, like a familiar friend or companion.
Like many teachers I know, I am book obsessed. I can never have enough books and as many books as I know (and I know a lot), there are always new ones to discover.
My work this year has been largely focused on primary writing. When I read a children’s book I start to imagine how it can empower the young writers I encounter. That’s why this excerpt from Choice Words by Peter Johnston spoke to me.
Children becoming literate need to learn the significant features of text, how it is organized, how it relates to spoken language, how to recognize the little tricks authors use to compel readers, when to use which sort of written language, and so forth. However, no learner can afford to be dependent on the teacher for everything that needs to be noticed, so teachers have to teach children to look for possibilities. .
Books are an essential part of writing workshop. As a writing teacher, I have been reading books differently for many years. I read like a writer. As soon as I hold a book in my hands I can’t help but think of all the writing possibilities it holds and I can’t wait to share the possibilities with my students. I want them to look at a published book by an author we admire and think, “I can do that!”
I read or I should say re-read for the tenth time, Knuffle Bunny by Mo Willems, to my son’s kindergarten class. Knuffle Bunny is one of those books that holds so many writing possibilities for kindergartners. Together we started to notice all the cool stuff Mo does with his words and pictures. I would stop periodically and think aloud. “I’m noticing Mo’s black and white photographs and drawings. The photos show where Trixie is and the drawings show Trixie.” Ali points out, “I notice that sometimes the people are coming out of the picture, like that man jogging.”
Together we notice a lot of interesting things Mo does. This is some of what we noticed:
- He use bold print when he want to emphasize a word or idea.
- He uses speech bubbles to show characters talking
- he uses different punctuation (., !,?, ….)
- he does zoom in or close up pictures
- his characters facial expressions show the reader how they feel.
- He uses interesting words (“boneless”)
- He tells a “time when…” story from beginning to middle to end.
- His dedication tells us this story came from his life.
The best part of this read aloud, actually it was more like a shared reading (the kids memorized most of the words), was when I opened the book and Mark said, “Look! Mrs Cohen there is pictures of Knuffle Bunny in the washing machine!”
“Aha. Why do you think Mo did that?”
“He is giving us a clue about what is going to happen in the book!” proclaims Wade.
I respond, “Wow, what a cool thing for him to do, he puts a clue page before the book even begins! I wonder if Mo does that in his other books or if other authors do that too.”
“Do you think you might want to try this when you make books?” Of course they reply, “YES!”
These children know how to read like writers. They know how to notice and name the writer and/or illustrator’s techniques. They know they are part of a community of writers and that community includes their good friend Mo Willems.
That night I asked my son Zach if he liked when mommy came in to read. He said yes mom and you know something, you’re a good “noticer”.
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